What's in a kiss? Well, actually, quite a lot depending on who it's from, where you are, your mental state, their mental state, how long have you known them....
So in honor of smooches everywhere, especially in fiction and non-fiction, Cecelia Roberts and Christine Rains are hosting a Blogfest dedicated to the delectable (or sometimes, NOT) kiss. We are posting scenes from our stories - a kissing scene. First, if you'd like to participate, let's go over the rules:
1. Sign up on the linky list and
post the badge on your blog.
2. On one of the days of the week of
September 9th, post a kissing scene on your blog. It can be either fiction or
non-fiction.
3. Please do not exceed 250 words.
3. Please do not exceed 250 words.
4. This is a blogfest, so visit the
other participants and have fun!
I'm sharing a scene from my YA urban fantasy, Finding Me. This is the first kiss between my protagonist and her love interest:
With my eyes shut, I concentrated.
Possibly, if I thought of the two of us together, I could conjure something. I
tried, hard. But nothing registered. Only the memories from the last couple days. “I’m
sorry,” I said. Tears welled up in my eyes threatening to spill.
He drew my chin up to meet his
darkened eyes. “Don’t worry. We have time.” He stroked the side of my face gently,
and then traced his finger across my bottom lip. My mouth parted in
anticipation. My heart raced and my knees buckled. He bent closer. His eyes
never strayed from mine. I knew he wanted a kiss as much as I wanted one. His lips
lingered by mine as we stared into each other. His eyes glossing to a warm
caramel. He bent his head and closed the gap. Our lips touched. A shiver of
delight fluttered through my abdomen. Our lips moved in harmony, the electric
current pressed in on us again. It radiated from every crevice of my body.
“I love you,” he whispered. He continued to trace kisses
along my neck then across my chin.
I wanted to say I love you, too. But my
heart wouldn’t allow me to tell that lie. However, I could be. Soon. If I could
remember.
Maybe there’s nothing to remember. I
slapped back this thought, and continued to kiss my new found soul mate. But with
my eyes wide open.
Have a Great day. Read a book and laugh!
A soul mate but her heart wouldn't let her lie - how intriguing.
ReplyDeleteShe couldn't remember, but her body did! Lovely!
ReplyDeleteGreat scene! I love the kissing with eyes wide open. Thank you for participating in the blogfest.
ReplyDeleteI may not know why she doesn't remember, but I sure want her to.
ReplyDeleteLove the snippet! Soul mate stories, Count me in!! :) wouldn't definitely read on to know what happened, and why she couldn't remember. :)
ReplyDeleteOooh! I'm intrigued. She won't say she loves him, but her body does? This is interesting.
ReplyDeleteMy goodness - what's holding her back?
ReplyDeleteSometimes, for some reason, love just isn't there... yet. No matter, she wanted that kiss! Writer’s Mark
ReplyDeleteOoh, this is nice!
ReplyDeleteInteresting scene! Well done!
ReplyDeleteI love how this scene is surrounded by the eyes shut and then open. It's a nice added touch. :)
ReplyDeleteWell done! I'm certainly intrigued!
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