tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3034870489740704181.post2957597279486372223..comments2024-01-30T02:34:48.951-06:00Comments on Dawn Brazil’s Brilliant Babbles about Books: Short Story...Breaking up is Hard to DoAuthor Dawn Brazilhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17266576901266161844noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3034870489740704181.post-31478672854806355762011-06-20T05:50:10.079-05:002011-06-20T05:50:10.079-05:00Yeah, different.. worth pursuing.
xxYeah, different.. worth pursuing.<br />xxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3034870489740704181.post-23717648802293124122011-06-20T01:37:51.823-05:002011-06-20T01:37:51.823-05:00Thanks, RaShelle.Thanks, RaShelle.Author Dawn Brazilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266576901266161844noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3034870489740704181.post-69371783193893091332011-06-18T18:46:09.863-05:002011-06-18T18:46:09.863-05:00Fun writing, Dawn! Enjoyed it lots. =D Thanks for ...Fun writing, Dawn! Enjoyed it lots. =D Thanks for sharing.RaShelle Workmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17582252557500502186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3034870489740704181.post-51288656811313819832011-06-17T18:08:19.806-05:002011-06-17T18:08:19.806-05:00Thanks, Elizabeth. I'm so glad you enjoyed it....Thanks, Elizabeth. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.Author Dawn Brazilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266576901266161844noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3034870489740704181.post-20814412034514085202011-06-17T17:15:31.764-05:002011-06-17T17:15:31.764-05:00This was my first time reading paranormal literatu...This was my first time reading paranormal literature also, and in this form it was very entertaining. You really had me right until the end. Excellently written. Bravo!Elizabeth Younghttp://gardengatewares.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3034870489740704181.post-87561351715754204702011-06-17T17:04:32.461-05:002011-06-17T17:04:32.461-05:00Thanks, Brenda. And do come back and read Wosushi....Thanks, Brenda. And do come back and read Wosushi. Thanks!Author Dawn Brazilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266576901266161844noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3034870489740704181.post-22870066380296187812011-06-17T15:49:09.479-05:002011-06-17T15:49:09.479-05:00I am bookmarking this so I can come back later whe...I am bookmarking this so I can come back later when I ABC songs aren't playing in the background ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3034870489740704181.post-81152252643769904712011-06-17T14:54:15.660-05:002011-06-17T14:54:15.660-05:00I am with Bella and Kelly, got me there.. I love t...I am with Bella and Kelly, got me there.. I love that when it happens. I like stories like this, the unexpected. Don't stop..Brendahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08425528423649700111noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3034870489740704181.post-71831420756351641382011-06-17T08:05:42.456-05:002011-06-17T08:05:42.456-05:00Tosh, glad I provided you with your first experien...Tosh, glad I provided you with your first experience with paranormal. Hope you enjoyed it! I commented on your story too.<br /><br />Kelly, Bella, I love that it was a surprise to you what Amy was going to do. That's what I wanted. It's not a perfect story yet but it wrote it for fun about a year ago and I keep changing it. I don't have a "before" written down but it is in my head. Maybe I will tell more...not sure right now. Thanks for the comments.Author Dawn Brazilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266576901266161844noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3034870489740704181.post-70628343489863601062011-06-17T07:41:46.086-05:002011-06-17T07:41:46.086-05:00Dawn, I did not see that coming! I love the elemen...Dawn, I did not see that coming! I love the element of surpise toward the end. I would love to read the "before," part, ; the part that tells us about Amy. I'm looking forward to new developments in this story!Bellahttp://gypsyroxylee.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3034870489740704181.post-55510897664883766962011-06-17T05:48:40.257-05:002011-06-17T05:48:40.257-05:00Wow, I wasn't expecting the story to take that...Wow, I wasn't expecting the story to take that turn! Very cool!Kelly Hashwayhttp://www.kellyhashway.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3034870489740704181.post-55413225987674412032011-06-17T05:16:10.297-05:002011-06-17T05:16:10.297-05:00This was my first time reading paranormal lit. She...This was my first time reading paranormal lit. She was so back and forth, I was thinking 'Gee, she's wicked. Is this what we put guys through?' And then. all else starts to unfold. It certainly made me think outside the box. As a hesitant reader of paranormal, I was interested. Are there paranormal short stories out there that are popular? I think you could add more but keep it as a short story. I'm thinking along the lines of Alfred Hitchcock stuff, where there are snippets of a story that leaves you wondering or just scared or thinking, that was so weird. Yeah, keep it short but add on to it.<br /><br />I just put an excerpt of a short story on my site. I was nervous putting it out there but there goes it. Check it out when you have time.<br /><br />Keep it up!<br /><br /><br />Totsymae<br />www.totsymae.comTotsymaehttp://www.totsymae.comnoreply@blogger.com